Esther Sylvester

Hi! This was really nice. You have a good talent for descriptions. This isn't too long or long winded, which is good. What I think this piece needs is more ...

Hi! So this is a part of a random comic series. I remember a show called the "Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy", where they died a lot but still ...

Hey! I remember reading this earlier back. I remember I liked it a lot. Since this is short the review will be short. Rejoice! Okay, I like this. My only ...

Hi! This was cute until the ending line, which didn't make sense. Did that little girl just kill her family? Clarify? Other than that, this kept my interest. It was ...

Hi there! First off, the title cracked me up a little because I thought you literally meant you were writing an imaginary prologue. In the title, put a ":" in ...

Hi! This was well written, but really random. I know it is based off a dream, but that doesn't mean you should write it exactly as one. No dream makes ...

Hey retro! You new here? If you are, then welcome to YWS! This was a gripping piece. Well done. However, just looking at this, I can tell that this piece ...

Hi there! Here to review as requested. Now, reading this, it almost seems like this piece could stand alone from the other part. This has such a one shot feel ...

Hey lily! So this was good. I've never been fond of vampire novels-ever, but this WAS interesting. And creepy. Good job with the creepiness. PLOT: Well, it is creepy. The ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS! I'm Esther, pleased to meet you. Okay, this is interesting. I like this. PLOT: Interesting premise. I like stories like these. I want to know ...

Hey Sarebear. Tis Esther her for reviewing. This is very pretty. I like the meaningful tone to it. Since these are lyrics, you should clearly mark your chorus. That way ...

Holy flying discus Batman! This was fantastic. I loved every second of it. Gah! I wish I could read more. I seriously, seriously, wish this wasn't a one shot so ...

Hi! I'm Esther and I will be reviewing you today. I like this! Let's get down to the details, shall we? I like the main character's character, and the endearing ...

This is pretty good. I like the poem all the way to here: so I guess that were never gonna find out till one of us ask and the says ...

Hey Raven, what's up? I'll be reviewing you today. I haven't read the previous parts but I will give it a shot. Good hook here at the beginning-it kept the ...